Is sense of humor important in life?
A sense of humor
is important in our lifes. Humor is good for our mental health, it reduces
stress and makes us feel better. When we laugh our body produce edorphins and
it can make our day much better. You will be less stressed about difficult
challanges. A sense of humor also helps us in social life. Laughing with others
can help in making new friendships. Smile makes you look more confident and
friendly. In conclusion humor have many positiv and important influence on our
lifes.
Why not mention the positive influence in the first sentence? This would help the reader to identify your main idea.
OdpowiedzUsuńThe sentences could be more efficiently connected. For example, this one "You will be less stressed about difficult challenges." is sort of hanging in the air, unrelated to the one before and after.
OdpowiedzUsuńEvery thing that you've written about an influence of humour on our lives is true and surely significant.